repetition - Renewable energy will not run out but the other sources such as fossil fuels will run out., starting a sentence with a coordinating conjunction - Every year, around 4 million people die owing to air pollution. So renewable energy is essential to protect people from diseases caused by polluted air, subject / verb agreement - Furthermore, the technology of renewable energy use the resources of the environment., use of first-person pronouns - I disagree with people who think that the government should not invest in these alternative energy source., informal language - People must think of kids’ futures and invest wisely, run-on sentence - Approximately four million people die due to air pollution, renewable energy decreases air pollution and protects people from diseases., too many clauses in a single sentence - By being the best way to liberate mankind from tedious mechanical labour, AI can reduce the exploitation of the proletariat by capitalists just as the appearance of the automobile did not destroy the economy at that time, but only brought a reshuffle of the capitalists allowing the poor to buy cheaper goods and better services such as online education thanks to intelligent technology, incorrect article use - An rapid development of the artificial intelligence in recent years has had significant impact on world economy.,

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