The man shovelled food into his mouth like a bulldozer. - The man was incredibly greedy. , As I turned the corner, I saw the accident and froze to the spot.  - As I turned the corner, I saw the accident and went into shock. , The hairs on the back of my neck stood on their ends as I crept up the stairs. - I crept up the stairs, scared out of my wits. , My blood boiled when I realised that my lottery ticket had been stolen.  - I became very angry when someone stole my lottery ticket. , Sweat dripped down my back as I lay in the sun on the beach.  - I was so hot lying on the beach in the sun. , The child could barely keep his eyes open during dinner. - The child was tired at dinner time. , My mother lay on her bed surrounded by her beloved books.  - My mother loved to read. , The cats followed me around the house, nipping at my ankles, begging to be fed.   - The cats were hungry. ,

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