1) Koalas are really cute and I will be talking about the animal that I chose to write about. a) Koala's are really cute and I will be talking about the animal that I chose to write about. b) Koalas' are really cute and I will be talking about the animal that I chose to write about. c) It's perfect- don't change anything! 2) Born koalas are the size of a large jelly bean. a) Born, koalas are the size of a large jelly bean. b) Born koalas, are the size of a large jelly bean. c) It's perfect- don't change anything! 3) A joey spends most of its time in its mother’s pouch. a) A joey spends most of it's time in its mother’s pouch. b) A joey spends most of its time in it's mother’s pouch. c) It's perfect- don't change anything! 4) Koalas weigh 9 to 30 pounds and (4.1 - 13.6 kg). a) Koala's weigh 9 to 30 pounds and (4.1 - 13.6 kg). b) Koalas weigh 9 to 30 pounds (4.1 - 13.6 kg). c) It's perfect- don't change anything! 5) The southern koalas grow thicker fur. a) The southern koala's grow thicker fur. b) The Southern koalas grow thicker fur. c) It's perfect- don't change anything! 6) The koalas head is large and round. a) The koalas' head is large and round. b) The koala's head is large and round. c) It's perfect- don't change anything! 7) The ears are furry and big. a) The ear's are furry and big. b) The ears' are furry and big. c) It's perfect- don't change anything! 8)  there noses are big and black. a) Their noses are big and black. b) They’re noses are big and black. c) It's perfect- don't change anything! 9) Their fur is grey, brown and white. a) There fur is grey, brown and white. b) They're fur is grey, brown and white. c) It's perfect- don't change anything! 10) They have no fur on there nose their fur is on their chest, inner arm, ears and bottom. a) They have no fur on there nose. Their fur is on their chest, inner arm, ears and bottom. b) They have no fur on their nose. Their fur is on their chest, inner arm, ears and bottom. c) It's perfect- don't change anything! 11) Shape of the koalas nose is a shape of a spoon the bodys length of 60 - 85 cm. a) The koala's nose is the shape of a spoon. The body's length is 60 - 85 cm. b) The koalas nose is the shape of a spoon. The bodys length of 60 - 85 cm. c) It's perfect- don't change anything! 12) There arms are really strong. a) Their arms are really strong. b) They're arms are really strong. c) It's perfect- don't change anything! 13) Koalas have sharp claws. a) Koala's have sharp claws. b) Koalas have sharp claw's. c) It's perfect- don't change anything!

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